the inconsistency with the scene with Alex eyes and noir's beard being gone for a sec did bug me off a little but it didn't distract me from what was going on. other than that i really like the color palette on this as well as the backgrounds for this. as for the story itself you continue to make it interesting without being so in your face at the same time and the mystery of the island has me hooked. i also liked that noir and Alex's chemistry has build up to this and hope it gets developed more later in the series. the cliffhanger feels random though and left a sour taste in my mouth as to why she was there when she was aware that they were coming soon. good work still